A summary of my strengths and weaknesses after having peers review my outline:
A strength seemed to be my unique topic idea, stated a few times. Also that I am comparing and contrasting wolves to people which is interesting.
Suggestions include narrowing the focus, finding the history of evolvement, researching a behavioral change due to human expansion, and appealing to a large audience.
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